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Dot Dot: Using Colons
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We have all seen those two ubiquitous dots--the colon. People use them all the time, but are
they used correctly? Take a look at the following sentence.
For our
camping trip, I brought: a
lantern, a sleeping bag, food, water, and a flashlight. |
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Was the colon used correctly here? If you said
"yes," then you are probably one of the millions of people who
uses the colon INCORRECTLY!
Let's begin with the easy uses. In a
formal letter or business letter, a colon is often used.
Dear
Sir:
We were very honored to have you
come visit our company.
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The second usage is to separate a title and a
subtitle. When the title needs a further explanation, a subtitle can
be used.
Math
Applications:
Using Calculus to Determine the Age of Rocks. |
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The most common mistake with colons is when the colon
is placed right in the middle of an independent
clause (a complete idea or sentence). A colon should be written
AFTER an independent clause or complete idea. Take a look at the
following example.
Every
repairman must have:
a screwdriver, a hammer, and a saw. |
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Most people would say this
sentence is fine; however, it is incorrect. Look a the part of this
sentence BEFORE the colon.
Every
repairman must have: |
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Is this a complete idea
(independent clause)? NO. Could someone say, "Every repairman
must have"? Of course, not. It doesn't make sense and it is
meaningless. This is why the colon was not used correctly
here. So, how do you fix it? Just make the part of the
sentence before the colon a complete idea. Take a look at the following
sentence.
There are three things every
repairman must have:
a screwdriver, a hammer, and a saw. |
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Is the part of the sentence
before the colon a complete idea?
There
are three things every repairman must have: |
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Yes! This is a complete idea. Of course, the listener or reader
might want to ask what the three things are that every repairman must have, but
this is still a complete idea (independent clause).
The last common misuse of the colon is with quotations. Quotations
typically have a comma before it.
The football
team was tired. The coach said,
"We can still win." |
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For more information about quotations and commas, click
here.
When the quotation adds information or explains the ideas presented in the
clause (part of the sentence) before the quotation, a colon is usually better.
This usage usually requires that the part of the sentence before the quote be a
complete idea (independent
clause).
After feeling discouraged and
behind 25 points in the last basketball championship game, the
coach was reminded of something Winston Churchill once said:
"Courage is the first of human qualities because it is the
quality which guarantees all others." |
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Now, let's go back to the first sentence above.
For our
camping trip, I brought: a
lantern, a sleeping bag, food, water, and a flashlight. |
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Do you know what is wrong with it? You're right! The part of the
sentence before the the colon is NOT a complete idea (For our
camping trip, I brought). This sentence can also be
fixed.
For our
camping trip, I brought various essential items: a
lantern, a sleeping bag, food, water, and a flashlight. |
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Quiz Time
Directions: Find what is wrong with the following
sentences with colons.
1. Dear Sir or Madame,
I am interested in applying for a position at your
company. Attached you will find my résumé.
2. Food Marketing-How to Sell Snack Items in a Grocery Store
3. My favorite books are: Huckleberry Finn, Lord of the
Rings, and Animal Farm.
4. Dear Tim,
Hi! What's up? I want to see you.
It is always good to see old friends.
5. Advertisers know there are some color combinations that are very
eye-catching. For example :
black on a yellow background and
white on a dark blue background.
6. When Ricky saw the sad
faces of the people who failed the college entrance exam, he was reminded of what
Orison Swett Marden (founder of Success Magazine) used to say, "There
is no medicine like hope, no incentive so great, and no tonic so powerful as
expectation of something tomorrow."
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Answers are in
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1. Dear Sir or Madame :
I am interested in applying for a position at your
company. Attached you will find my résumé.
This is a formal letter; there
should be a colon after the "Dear Sir."
2. Food Marketing :
How to Sell Snack Items in a Grocery Store
This is a title and a
subtitle. Notice that there is a space after the colon.
3.
I have several favorite books:
Huckleberry Finn, Lord of the
Rings, and Animal Farm.
In the original sentence, the
clause before the colon is not a complete idea (which is called a dependent
clause). Any reasonable complete idea here is fine.
4. Dear Tim ,
Hi! What's up? I want to see you.
It is always good to see old friends.
There is nothing wrong
with this example. This is a friendly letter. Friendly and
personal letters require a comma.
5. Advertisers know there are some color combinations that are very
eye-catching , for
example, black on a yellow background and
white on a dark blue background.
"For example"
usually requires a comma. Notice there are commas both before and
after "for example" because the part after "for example"
is NOT a complete idea but just a small list. 6. When Ricky saw the sad
faces of the people who failed the college entrance exam, he was reminded of what
Orison Swett Marden (founder of Success Magazine) used to say: "There
is no medicine like hope, no incentive so great, and no tonic so powerful as
expectation of something tomorrow."
This is a quotation that
explains the first clause of the sentence; additionally, the clause before
the quotation is an independent clause.
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Rules to Remember!
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The rules given above should cover 90% of the
situations where you would use a colon. However, there are times when
these rules are broken, and it is acceptable. For example, notice how we
wrote the word "directions." We used a colon followed by a
capital letter. This is another common usage of the colon which can be
found in numerous professional books and periodicals.
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If
the part of the sentence after the colon is a complete idea (independent
clause), the first letter of that clause may be capitalized. This is
commonly done in magazines and other professional forms of writing.
There
are two skills that every martial arts student must master: Self-control and
discipline are what divides the amateur from the advanced
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