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Welcome to this week's FREE writing lesson
These two sentences can be combined into one sentence. How? You can use either a comma or a semicolon. When using the comma, you must also use a word that connects the two sentences (or ideas). The most widely used word is "and." Take a look: Margaret loves hot chocolate, and Joshua loves iced tea. Of course you could use the word "but" or a host of other words. In addition, you must add a connecting word to make this sentence grammatically correct. Therefore, the following sentence is INCORRECT. Margaret loves hot chocolate, Joshua loves iced tea. This sentence is called a run-on sentence. In other words, it is too long. For a further explanation of run-on sentences, click here. For a further explanation of commas, click here.
Using Semicolons 1. If you want to keep things simple, you can use just a semicolon. Take a look: Margaret loves hot chocolate; Joshua loves iced tea. 2. The great thing about semicolons is that nothing else is needed. The only requirement is that the two sentences that are combined must be related. One could never correctly write: Margaret loves hot chocolate; I am watching TV. These ideas are completely unrelated. Hence, they cannot be combined. 3. When a sentence contains a transitional word or phrase (see below), you can combine that sentence with the one that it refers to (or related to). For example, In Taiwan, people drive on the right-hand side of the road. However, people drive on the left-hand side of the road in Hong Kong. -OR- In Taiwan, people drive on the right-hand side of the road; however, people drive on the left-hand side of the road in Hong Kong.
4.) If the two sentences (ideas) you are combining have commas or other punctuation, AND you want to use "for," "or," "but," "and," or "nor," it is better to use a semicolon to combine these sentences. For example, in the above sentence, we wrote: Margaret loves hot chocolate. Joshua loves iced tea.becomes Margaret loves hot chocolate, and Joshua loves iced tea. Neither parts of the sentence (called independent clauses) nor the original two sentences have a comma (except the one comma in the middle combining the two sentences). However, if one or both of the sentences had its own commas, then you would still use "and" with a semicolon. My boss ordered new computers, printers, and scanners; but the order was incorrectly filled. NOTE: Although we used "but" to connect the two sentences, we used a semicolon because the first part of the sentence (the first independent clause) has its own commas. *Source: The New Webster's Grammar Guide by Madeline Semmelmeyer and Donald O. Bolander.
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